OUGD502 - RedSquare Post-Deadline Advancements & Tutor Feedback

Since the brief OUGD504 - Studio Brief 2 - Design for Screen, I have been making advancements within the application and have been reaching out to people within the business industries trying to push my concept into a reality. A pitch has been scheduled in front of board members where I will present my concept in the hope to get it funded into a working and developed app. The presentation is shown below;

I gathered some feedback off John before structuring and planning the presentation, the notes are listed below;

Keep it simple

must remember copyright put a c in a circle on any slide

how much is it going to cost?

I can put an email together sending pricing

Questions they will ask me

What do you want us to do?

Dylan Red Square  Check if you can use Red Square? It may need to be RED SQUARE (Properties).

All work within this and relating to this product presentation is covered by copyright of Dylan (Surname). ©

Describe what the app does in easy steps, both for Selling and renting.

Step by step.

Introduce yourself as a Graphic Designer  (don’t mention this was a College

project) it is a self initiated as a commercial undertaking.

WHAT IS IT?

Take your time to explain each section and if they try to ask questions tell them

you will answer questions at the end of the presentation as you may cover items 

during the presentation.

WHY IS IT A GOOD APP?

Short explanation as a basic reason.

WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM US?

Take what they see as the opportunity?

If they see this as a NEW business, you want them to :

A) Pay all launch/creative costs, you retain copyright.

The person who was reached out to was a man my mother knew a few years ago, I asked if she still had his number and reached out to him via text. Morgan owns various businesses in the manchester area including the whole barton arcade on deansgate and the loyds bank, if the presentation goes well, he would be the perfect person to collaborate with and push the concept further.